Thursday, March 12, 2009

Theme #6 - Thesis Statement

I think that the website that was most helpful was the first one. I think it broke down and explained each part of the thesis statement, and it was easy to understand.

Ernesto wanted to become a leader of the people, with the desire to help them. He had strong views and acted on them, by attempting to liberate his country. Carried away with this desire, he lost control, and disregarded his means to an end.

1 comment:

  1. this is good, but i think u don't have the impact he had on the world.

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